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PostSubject: talk about your self...   talk about your self... EmptyTue Oct 27, 2015 11:41 pm

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my name is mohammed hassan , i am 17 years old , i am from saudi arabia , and i live in riyadh .
i am student in .............. high school .
i have three brothers and three sister with my father and my mother .
my hobbies are playing basketball and using a computer.
my favorite color is white and i like to eat hamburgers and shawarma
and i want to become a doctor in the future .
and thats all about me

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My name is Mohammed Hassan, I am 17 years old , I'm from Saudi Arabia, and I live in Riyadh .
I’m a student in high school.
I have three brothers and three sisters with my father and my mother .
My hobbies are playing basketball and using a computer.
My favorite color is white and I like to eat hamburgers and shawarma
and I want to become a doctor in the future
and that's all about me


لو تقول في الاخير My ambition in the future is to become a doctor. افضل من I want to become a doctor.

تصير الجملة الاخيرة بشكل افضل ... كذا:


My favorite color is white and I like to eat hamburgers and shawarma. My ambition in the future is to become a doctor. And that’s all about me.
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PostSubject: Re: talk about your self...   talk about your self... EmptyTue Oct 27, 2015 11:43 pm


My name is Mohammed Hassan, I am 17 years old, I'm from Saudi Arabia, and I live in Riyadh.
I’m a high school student.
I have three brothers and three sisters with my father and mother.
My hobbies are playing basketball and using a computer.
My favourite colour is white.
My two favourite foods are hamburgers and shawarma.
My ambition is to become a doctor.
and that's all about me
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